'I love you like'

[sarey]

I love you like the waves gently splashing on the sand, peacefully revealing the sound.

I love you like the mist covering the mountains, with the sky in the background painted a deep sea blue.

I love you like a rose revealing it's beauty, the aroma awakening senses within the nose.

I love you like a sun shining brightly down onto the ocean, the reflection blurred from the waves.

I love you like a leaf dropping from it's tree, flying from the whistling wind blowing softly.

I love you like the roots in the ground creating a magnificant flower, slowly transforming into petals of beauty.

I love you like the snow falling onto the ground, glistening from the suns warmth.

I love you like a rainbow showing within the distance after showers of ray.

I love you like the fire burning on a cold winters night, glowing the room with heat.

I love you like dolphins jumping out of the sea, releasing their soothing sound.

 

 

 

(I couldn't post it in the Poetry part, please may a MOD move it to that place if they don't mind? I really would like feedback on this poem)

[Raiden]

That's just beautiful, sarey

[Cimmie]

You are a talented writer, Sarey!

 

That's really good. I hope you keep writing.

[papersky]

I thought this was going to be a game, and I was going to add:

I love you like a fat kid loves cake.

 

BUT, then I read your poem, and it's really pretty!

My favorite line is probably the one about fire, and how it 'glows the room with heat.' That's a really good description.

[sarey]

thankyou everyone, i thought it wasn't very... good, so i just wanted feedback thankyou

[sandyv]

Sarah, thats really nice, I really enjoyed it... keep up the good work!

[comfyshoes]

once again, written with insight well beyond your years!

 

i love the way you write. almost inspiring as i struggle to find my peotic niche.

 

keep it up

[sarey]

heh, thankyou sandy and comfy

[Jeen]

I love you like a shooting star for you bring joy to my hart and soul.....

I love you like a red red rubie bringing joy to us all her on ena....

 

I loved it.

 

Thanks!

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Its really beautiful sweetie. YOU have an amazing gift

[sarey]

thankyou Jeen and ABD.

 

You do too ABD