trying2forget Posted September 11, 2007 Share Posted September 11, 2007 The webs weave as the Small spider crawls into your ear And wraps its silky habitat Around your brain and Pulls it just tight enough So that you lose total control But you never had control That was taken from you That day The day in the woods When you couldn't stop... Him His hands invaded you just as The small spider has His thoughts were obvious As he groped what he thought Would give him pleasure And now His oily fingerprints And perverted scent Lies forever In your hair As with every breath You remember the spider On that cool afternoon And when he stole Your innosense And knew that You would never forget him You feel gross You feel as if everyone can see Where he has touched... Where his lips left traces of Their poison The spider continues to weave A silky web through memories Though the day the spider invaded Has long passed. Link to comment
PersonalMe Posted September 11, 2007 Share Posted September 11, 2007 hi, that was really strong, i really felt that...are you ok? if you ever want to talk, message me. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 11, 2007 Share Posted September 11, 2007 That really is one powerful poem. You have alot of strength to write such emotions down. Link to comment
candidvibe Posted September 11, 2007 Share Posted September 11, 2007 I Have Read Alot Of Poems That Had To Do With Rape But They Always Felt Like A Third Persons Perspective Even Though Im Sure Not All Of Them Was. This One Feels To Me As If You Peakedthrough My Window And Saw Everything That Wasnt Suposted To Be Seen Or Spoken And You Told,...you Told Becouse You Have A Window Of Your Own. This Feels Very Kendred Spirit. Thank You Link to comment
girl friend Posted September 11, 2007 Share Posted September 11, 2007 Wow thats incredible, its great that you can work through these emotions you know, even if you are trying to forget. It was horrible what happened to you, and wrong, and not your fault, you know all that right? I hope you're ok. Do you want to talk about it? xx Link to comment
trying2forget Posted September 12, 2007 Author Share Posted September 12, 2007 I'm okay, seriously though thanks for all of your feedback and thanks for taking the time to read it. I feel like people care for me here. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 12, 2007 Share Posted September 12, 2007 We do I adore your avator by the way hehe. Very cool! Link to comment
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