KellyWyndham Posted May 29, 2007 Share Posted May 29, 2007 you probably don't remember me but i remember when we met it was as if i'd drawn you in my mind and suddenly you came alive you probably don't remember me but i remember when you smiled and my eyes filled up with tears and all at once you became the answer you probably don't remember me but i remember everything you said everything you did, every reason why you laughed every time you looked my way you probably don't remember me but someone's left your imprint on my heart and when i think of you it aches so i try not to think of you at all. you probably don't remember me but here i sit at this desk with only your memory to comfort me as another man leaves you probably don't remember me but do you know that nothing compares to you no-one lives up to you, it doesn't match up to you. you left me behind to wait and to want you probably don't remember me but will you answer me this question. is this love, in its selflessness and patience? or does the greed and loneliness i feel without you make it obsession? Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted May 31, 2007 Share Posted May 31, 2007 Your poetry is always so emotional. Is wonderful how you can put such emotion to words and not lose any of the feelings. Really great work. Link to comment
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