Stinkweed

That's beautiful. Your writing never ceases to amaze me. Great job =D>

That's a great poem. Keep up the good work =D>

Beautiful poem. It really is more than great. You should show it to Dave. Keep up the good work =D>

This piece is Kind of charming... I like your use of personification. It makes it seem kind of... cute. Good work here.

Ok, listen to me. Talk to her. Just do it. I know it's hard as hell, but it's the only way... I made the mistake of thinking there was another way, but made an embarrassment out of myself... Just try your best. Good luck and best wishes.

That's a great poem. I don't understand why nobody else posted their thoughts... Well, I like your use of rhythm. Great job =D>

What was her lie? Please, expand the situation.

It's actually something everybody should have in mind from now on. Great job on this post... It's not just for people who cut, but also for everybody who suffers depression, or is in a down part of their lives. Everything you said makes sense, and is completely true. I hope more people take a look at it. Best wishes.

Excellent poem =D>. You're very talented in expressing deep feelings, because I know exactly how you feel... Like mahlina, I hope you stop cutting. Best wishes.

It's amazing. Great job =D>

no that is not my work, i already said that at first line of this post.

I see... Whoops, my bad. I've been very distracted... Sorry.

that's a great poem. It's really very good. Keep up the good work =D>

It's a great poem. It not only shows us feelings and emotions, but also faith, which is something I've always lacked. It's very good indeed. Keep up the good work =D>

Great poem. I've read a lot of your poems, and like other writters, you never cease to amaze me. It's really good. =D> Congratulations.

I've read tons of poems written by you. And they all surprise me. Where do you find the inspiration? =D> Keep up the good work.

Very good poem. Is it really about you? I mean, it says your a male, but the poems speaks about you being a female. Anyway, it's really good. Keep up the good work =D>.

Very well written. It's a very abstract world, like most of us posses in our minds, lol. Great job.

Great poem. It's so full of feelings and emotions. It's really great =D>.

This poem is terrific. You're very talented. I enjoy reading your poems because they have a very good use of rhythm, which I like a lot. =D> Keep up the good work.

Great poem. It invokes so many emotions... Congratulations. Keep up the good work.

That's really good. Such deep feelings for another person... I hope you feel better soon. Good job.

Thanks everyone for your replies. I have a little question, though... What would happen if that person already appeared, but the person I described missed the opportunity already? I talk about this in 3rd person, because I know such person has never appeared or came close in my life. But what if that happened? Will there be another chance? Oh, and thanks for having such a good premonition on me, Molly. I hope it comes to be true.

Well, not that this is everything I care about... But I've been wondering a couple of times... I understand that most people date various people until they find "The one". Some have the luck of finding that special someone sooner than others, and in less attempts. For others, I think it may take forever and countless relationships before they find such person. So, I was wondering, for all of us that are single (By that, I mean never having a girlfriend) and get to our 20's (I'm not in my 20's yet, but it's just my premonition, that when I get to my 20's, I'll still be single... On the other hand, I could always be wrong...), does that mean that if we have a late start in the dating "world", it will take even longer to find that person? I'm not in a hurry, and I'll take anything that comes in years to come. So, I guess I'd just like some opinions. Thanks.

I prefer if she is honest, smart, responsible, mature. I guess the "librarian" good girl type you mentioned before includes all of them. So, yeah, I prefer that type.

I think it does make sense... I mean, how can you love someone whom you can't trust? I mean, because you say you don't trust your parents, but they aren't going to cheat on you... a girl in whom you can't trust can. I dunno if this made sense.