hey guys,
i was going through some papers and came accross this that i wrote a few months ago. let me know what you think (honest opinions only please if you think it is sick and wrong please tell me. if you think it is amazing thats appreciated too)
all the sorrow
all the misery
all the people who fell the sadness that comes with death
they cry, they sob, and hold each other for support
everyone wants there to be respect,
but what they dont say is what everyone knows
no one will say it was his fault
no one will say it was anyone's fault
all they say is it was a horrible accident
but the fact is that it could have been prevented
could have been stopped
simple little things, he could have done
things the others could have done
to stop what is called "unreal", "horrible" and many other awful words
everyone cries for the dead
everyone says it is sad that one is dead
the sad part is nobody realizes that he was the luckiest one
the rest of the people in the car
have to live out their lives
with the guild of knowing they could have stopped his death
some are in the hospital
some are not
both know that they are to blame for their dead friend
everyone cries for the dead
everyone morns for the "victim"
i cry for those who live with the guilt
those who wish death would take them too
because it isnt fair they survived and others died
pray not for those who are in a better place
pray for those wit the emotional scars of staying here
anyways i just wanted to know what you guys thought of this. when i first wrote it i shared it with 2 people. my mom and my girlfriend. both said basically the same thing. they thought i was sick and twisted for thinking this way. for thinking that maybe death is a better alternative then living through the car crash that made me write this.
i just wanted to know if i am really sick and twisted or if maybe there are other people out there who think the same way as i do.