Not Fitting A Large Circle Into A Large Square

[just_smile]

Hey guys,

This is a peom about how i have been feeling lately, i dont expect any replies i just want to say how i feel about life.

Its called:

 

Not Fitting A Large Circle Into A Large Square

 

Could this day be any worse

This have gone wrong

Im under a curse

A de ja vu too long

 

I started as me

But now things have changed

Now in the mirror i dont recognise who i see

My life has beeen rearranged

 

I dont know who i am

Or where im going

Life seems like a sham

This just arent flowing

 

Its like not fitting a large circle

Into a small square

____

 

I dont know who i am

Nor who i want to be

But if i could be anything

This once it woulnt be me!

 

____

 

Thanks for listening

LJ

[simply complicated]

hey whats up, i know your not expecting any replies but i just want to say i really like your poem, this being because i can relate, i like how you've managed to sum just about everything up into a small poem, your name should be shakespear, but anyway, good poem, you should write some more

[lunatic]

Hey Just_smile,

 

I can totally agree with this poem. It moved me because it was from your heart and I feeel the same way! Thankz!

 

-Hubman01

[just_smile]

hey,

thanks for replying, its nice when someone replies when your not expecting them to and to know what people thought of it; so thanks for reading it

 

~ shakespear