EmptySoul Posted September 17, 2003 Share Posted September 17, 2003 I still wanna be me inside But here's comin' all these changes Just to see you smile at me That way All you have to do Is touch me that way And everything'll be okay For a little while Your lips are kissin' away my fears Your words are dryin' up my tears Can't go forward, can't go back You're holdin' me on track For a little while All the nights I've cried Don't seem to make no difference Since you're by my side For the moment, yeah With your tender touch And lovin' words I'll forget that I been hurt For a little while Your lips are still kissin' away my fears Your words keep on dryin' up my tears Can't go forward, can't go back You're holdin' me on track For a little while So here we are, that's how it be I'm with you boy, and you're with me Though opprotunities have come We remain as one For just a little while EmptySoul Link to comment
Finzsoftie Posted September 17, 2003 Share Posted September 17, 2003 Empty soul you are great! Wowo, that's nice can you pm it to me PLZ PLZ PLZ!!!! Link to comment
Anamarie89 Posted September 17, 2003 Share Posted September 17, 2003 All the nights I've cried Don't seem to make no difference Since you're by my side For the moment, yeah With your tender touch And lovin' words I'll forget that I been hurt For a little while That's the best part. The rest you could probably still work on a little bit, but it is definitely very good! The chorus is nice as well. Have you thought about a tune to sing with it, or is it just the words right now? J/w, you don't have to tell me. Link to comment
Yahko Posted September 17, 2003 Share Posted September 17, 2003 Never believe the things they tell you Never trust the lies they feed you Never do what they want you to do Never be who they want you to be Link to comment
EmptySoul Posted September 17, 2003 Author Share Posted September 17, 2003 Thanks everyone...yes i have a tune to go with this song, i just think them up when i make up the words, but i don't really know how to convert the music in my head into notes... EmptySoul Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted September 17, 2003 Share Posted September 17, 2003 hey i thought that was a really good song, you seem to be really good at poems and songs is it something that you do when you have spare time? i wish i had a talent like that. anyway great work ~kel Link to comment
Anamarie89 Posted September 17, 2003 Share Posted September 17, 2003 hey, maybe since you can't turn the tunes into notes on your own, you could find someone who can! try someone who plays an instrument and is really really good at it, they might be able to help. Link to comment
EmptySoul Posted September 18, 2003 Author Share Posted September 18, 2003 thanks everyone...for those who asked, i write lyrics/poems to let out my emotions and to maybe let others relate to me... EmptySoul Link to comment
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