chai714 Posted February 6, 2007 Share Posted February 6, 2007 The laughs the crys the final goodbye the rain the pain memories remain newborn but old wisdom unfolds new stories are told Link to comment
brando Posted February 6, 2007 Share Posted February 6, 2007 Nice work Chai.... you summed it up nicely. I love the minimallistic style. Link to comment
gfein347 Posted February 7, 2007 Share Posted February 7, 2007 Wow...I liked this one too. Very well written! Link to comment
SoDone Posted February 10, 2007 Share Posted February 10, 2007 concentrated wistfulness... very good, Chai714. Link to comment
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