Illume

[bubbles]

Thursday Night

Back at the beach

Illume

Says the candle that I burn

A reflection in the window

All the way to point Dune

A cliff dweller from the old school-

 

I like the coastal cities

I like the lights

I like the way the ocean blends

Into the city at night

Like living on a working river

The coastline is glittering-

Like a diamond snake-

In a black sky

 

And I am alone with my thoughts

And how we could make it-

And what we have all been through

And all of the trauma-

With the smell of Nag Champa

Like a kiss- like a stranger-

What we have seen on this journey

Are what legends are made of-

 

I will not take you for granted

My friend, my dear one, my love-

I wouldn't trade you for jade…

Or for diamonds~

I need you to be there~

Please~

Remember when I am haunted

That I was just scared-

And when I remember

That day in my life-

I will remember that you-

Were there-

 

by Stevie Nicks

[Gunther]

ummm... okay cool poem, but what do you need to post that for? LoL i'm just saying =p

[SweetypieEnlightenedOne]

I loved your poem and thought it to be one of the better ones..I think that you should write the moderators and ask them if they would set aside a section for a poetry forums just for poets. I loved it..good work .

[neva_black_n_white]

seems like a great poem to me. keep writing it. i really liked it.

~kel