JustYourAverageGirl Posted December 6, 2006 Share Posted December 6, 2006 slice slice slice i should stop i should but i dont just three more slice slice slice six not there yet not deep enough just once more slice too deep red is pouring instead of dripping but this feeling.... is like no other its like im floating...floating away no pain, no gain float the memories away but its cold oh so cold deaths icy grip is on my wrist its welcomed with arms wide open for its cold embrace Link to comment
Ellie2006 Posted December 6, 2006 Share Posted December 6, 2006 JYAG, I love how your poems are so expressive ... The language is deliciously chilling ... Nice contrast b/t the ethereal feel of memories floating away and the "cold embrace" of the actual deed ... I know you said these poems are inspired by a friend but I feel as though this friend's actions pain you as well ... How are you coping? I am sure writing helps but have you considered talking to someone about this?? I don't want to overstep my bounds but would you perhaps give it a thought?? Link to comment
JustYourAverageGirl Posted December 6, 2006 Author Share Posted December 6, 2006 thank you ^_^ but this poem is actually...about me, well what i use to do. but lately have started it again. but as for my friend, i am coping pretty well with him, if i told someone about what he does then i would be attacked mentally. Link to comment
Ellie2006 Posted December 6, 2006 Share Posted December 6, 2006 Hi again JYAG, I will have to admit that I am rather ignorant about certain issues that're weighing down your heart and I don't want to say something stupid I am sure there are others wiser than I who can offer you better advice ... I know this isn't much but I just wanted to let you know that I am here to lend a helping ear whenever you feel like you need to vent or whatever ... Take care of yourself, JYAG ... Sending best wishes your way, Ellie Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted December 6, 2006 Share Posted December 6, 2006 Heyz, Sorry to hear bout that. Darl i know you know this but its not worth it. It will only hurt yourself more. That being said its a hell of alot harder to stop then just putting the blade away andi get that. Just try please. I've read alot of your posts and stuff and you seem like an awesome person, theres no point hurting yourself. Link to comment
SkylinesTurnstiles Posted December 7, 2006 Share Posted December 7, 2006 Heyz babe, i love it.Its really great, and darl try not to hurt your self your an ausum person just like rozie said.And you write ausumly to Link to comment
Daddy Bear Posted December 7, 2006 Share Posted December 7, 2006 such tragedy... life is so confounding, so confusing, that we can sometimes think of no better way to stop a pain than by distracting ourselves with another. i hope you're in a happier place soon. *huglet* Link to comment
JustYourAverageGirl Posted December 7, 2006 Author Share Posted December 7, 2006 yeah, i talked to my best friend, shes always there for me, always. so with her help i'll probably stop Link to comment
Ellie2006 Posted December 7, 2006 Share Posted December 7, 2006 yeah, i talked to my best friend, shes always there for me, always. so with her help i'll probably stop That's great! Have a happy December, JYAG! Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted December 7, 2006 Share Posted December 7, 2006 Awesome news! Glad to hear you have sum1 looking after ya! Link to comment
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