Boughtandpaidfor Posted August 24, 2006 Share Posted August 24, 2006 humid night outside aircon buzzes in the background small living space Link to comment
yeawutever Posted August 25, 2006 Share Posted August 25, 2006 Short but cool!!!!!!!!!!! Thumbs up Link to comment
brando Posted August 25, 2006 Share Posted August 25, 2006 yeh short, but its great Uh... it's Haiku 5,7,5 give or take some syllables. And i believe it is different in Japan. Link to comment
Boughtandpaidfor Posted August 25, 2006 Author Share Posted August 25, 2006 Uh... it's Haiku 5,7,5 give or take some syllables. And i believe it is different in Japan. humid night outside aircon buzzes above me a small living space Ahh...... I knew something was off balance. Link to comment
brando Posted August 25, 2006 Share Posted August 25, 2006 it flows much better than the first Haiku. Link to comment
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