SkylinesTurnstiles Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 Over my head I can try to float, But just end up suffocating Just longing for your love Hiding behind a smile And praying for grace I never knew… Everyone knows Tears weep Blood seeps Lights dim and people scream Time to close my eyes Time to say good bye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 Its sad but its a really nice poem, good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nottoogreen Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 Hi Liza! Great you are writing poems! Long time no hear, how are you? Do you know that we have a journal forum now, you can make your own thread and post anything you like. I have one about my 7 kids there. We read your journal and encourage you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steven1607307306 Posted August 22, 2006 Share Posted August 22, 2006 Nice poem, really capturing your feelings of lost love. I enjoyed it, write something else soon!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkylinesTurnstiles Posted August 24, 2006 Author Share Posted August 24, 2006 Thanks guys!you are the best.Yeah i havnt been on 4 a while mid-term assessment and school troubles.lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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