redrose85 Posted August 19, 2006 Share Posted August 19, 2006 I wrote this for my bf. Thinking of actually letting him see it haha.. Heaven's in your eyes It's written all over your face The imprint of your soul Can never be erased Heaven's in your touch In your big open smile I would marry you right now But I know we should wait awhile You are like heaven to me My sun and moon and stars This universe we're building Is exclusively ours You are my fall from grace And because of you Heaven's written all over my face. --- I'd really appreciate some feedback on this. Thanks! Link to comment
yeawutever Posted August 20, 2006 Share Posted August 20, 2006 Well written one there, he'll love it for sure!!!!!!!! Did he receive it by the way?? Link to comment
redrose85 Posted August 20, 2006 Author Share Posted August 20, 2006 not yet. I think I'll give it to him on his birthday Link to comment
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