NKP Posted July 27, 2006 Share Posted July 27, 2006 Everywhere i go people are hurting But no one seems to care People are cying People are dying Everyone walking around with a fake smile You and i are just holding on by a tread No one prays to be happy Everyone prays to die This is our world No one is happy What is happening to this world? Someone please tell me I havent seen a happy person in months Maybe this is how its spose to be This is our world Link to comment
ftc Posted July 27, 2006 Share Posted July 27, 2006 that was beautiful.... so deep and meaning and yet sooooooo very true.. Link to comment
itsallgrand Posted July 27, 2006 Share Posted July 27, 2006 Well expressed, kita. I could really feel the sadness and emptiness. I hope to see some happy poems soon. You write with honesty. I like that a lot. Link to comment
Q10 Posted July 27, 2006 Share Posted July 27, 2006 I like it too Kita! I agree, it has truth in it and you expressed it well! Keep em coming Link to comment
yeawutever Posted July 27, 2006 Share Posted July 27, 2006 So lovely words, yes indeed the world isn't like paradise at times, it's full of BS also. Link to comment
NKP Posted July 29, 2006 Author Share Posted July 29, 2006 Thank you all, i glad you liked it Link to comment
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