My poem - I don't care

[Thingamygig]

I don't care, that's enough said

These words are enough to kill me dead

I've cared for you as much as I will

I'll care for you, until

My days cloud over, grow dark & cold

I'll care for you until I'm old

But I seem to care all wrong

In verse, rhyme, Lyric & song

Death compared to loosing you is small

It's the thing I fear most of all

Without you there is no lust

My faith shatters, like my soul, into dust

I'd cry enough to make deserts flood

The love I feel is in my blood

So when you say "no one cares"

Please remember & hear this prayer

That I will love you all my days

& I will care in every way

 

 

This poem waz writen 4 the person i loved the most. Upon giving the poem to him he ripped it up.

[pimpcess]

Oh thats a real good poem well done.

[just_smile]

wow that was a really good poem, i can see that you really care this person, dont let the fact that he ripped it up get you down or stop you from writing more poems. they really express your feelings.

keep me posted if / when you write more

 

Just_smile :smilecolros: