EmptySoul Posted July 29, 2003 Share Posted July 29, 2003 i wrote this poem hmm maybe a year ago, so my writing is more mature now, but i just wanted to see what people think... different acts in different places just one person, a million faces get ahead, win all the races no one's real, don't ever trust there's no love; it's always lust be strong, be true, you must hearts get broken by the truth, the lies after a while, you run out of cries you harden your heart, the emotion just dies after the heartbreak you live life, have fun forget about love, there's never "the one" don't go head over heels, that's over and done keep the happiness so it's only skin deep no more "i love you's" dont take that leap just look for fun, not someone to keep theres no committmnet, there's always more than one guy get hurt again, you'd rather die no matter what, you're not gonna cry hide your emotions, swallow the pain try to remember to just play the game now u know how it feels, and nothing's the same Link to comment
raggamuffin Posted July 30, 2003 Share Posted July 30, 2003 Its really good, I can really relate to feeling like that a little while after my boyfriend broke up with me. Link to comment
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