AnotherBrokenDoll Posted March 11, 2006 Share Posted March 11, 2006 My heart is all alone, Its been swept out to sea, I keep you on the sand , I'll never let you see, Because within me are some secrets, I have to keep hidden, I cant bare you to see, The real me. For the one on the inside, Beyond my eyes, Hidden behind all the fake truths and lies, Wants nothing more than to love you. Except one small thing, I want you to love me. But how can this be, When you dont even really know me. I want to let you in, I need to let you see. But how can i do this, When you could never want me. So i keep on smiling , And pretending im ok, But when you see my tears, My scars and my heart out at sea, Remember twas you, Who just let me be. Link to comment
faust8 Posted March 11, 2006 Share Posted March 11, 2006 its really good! im kinda feeling the same way really great! Link to comment
ShySoul Posted March 11, 2006 Share Posted March 11, 2006 That was great Rozi. Remember though, as long as you keep the real you hidden, then people can't see it. At some point you have to open yourself up to them. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted March 13, 2006 Author Share Posted March 13, 2006 But if you keep yourself hidden you never get hurt! Link to comment
ShySoul Posted March 13, 2006 Share Posted March 13, 2006 Or you have all your problems and concerns weighing down on you until you can't take it any more. I was always the one to hold my problems in. Didn't put myself out there, so I wouldn't get hurt. Just ended up feeling alone and hurting myself. But I've found someone I can open up too, and she would never hurt me, has only made me feel happier then I've ever been. If you want to feel love and happiness, you have to be willing to risk the hurt. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted March 14, 2006 Author Share Posted March 14, 2006 I can deal with hurting myself but not others hurting me! If i hurt myself its like, ok who cares you're the one that did it. But if someone else hurts me i feel like im gonna burst because i hate the thought of being hated by anyone and if someone hurts me then they obviously hate me! Link to comment
Moon Goddess Posted March 14, 2006 Share Posted March 14, 2006 I like it alot, I have felt that way many times before and don't feel afraid to reach out if u make new friends you can start being the real you I liked the poem alot, keep posting I enjoyed it very much. Link to comment
KandiBabe Posted March 19, 2006 Share Posted March 19, 2006 Awww my baby is so emotional!!!!!!! I Love You 4Eva Babe And I Shall Kill Anyone Who Hurts You!!!!!!! Luv Ya 4Eva ME Link to comment
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