Outcast-Angel Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 Reason by outcast-angel Why don't you see that i'm not holding on for me that you're my only reason, you're my sanity. why can't you see the pain that tortures the pain that sears my mind that breaks my heart millions of pieces every day but i lost them all to you you're my only reason you're my last anchor you stop me from cutting too deep from cutting too close i'm torn and that's nothing new but before i had you now i'm hanging by a thread shards of pain in my brain like knife wounds in my gut my cut's getting deeper alone and cutting closer my pulse getting weaker louder till i can't hear you eyes close till i can't see you memory fades till i don't know you why didn't anyone see that i wasn't holding on for me that when i lost my reason i lost my sanity Link to comment
shorty20 Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 wow.... that was amazing. I loved it... you really have talent! Great job.. keep posting your poetry because I loved reading it!! Know exactly how you feel too! -Laura Link to comment
Outcast-Angel Posted December 27, 2005 Author Share Posted December 27, 2005 wow.... that was amazing. I loved it... you really have talent! Great job.. keep posting your poetry because I loved reading it!! Know exactly how you feel too! -Laura hey, thanks laura! i'm glad you liked it.. i'll keep working on stuff so i can post more for you, and anyone else who likes it.. although, i'm not sure that it's all talent. probably at least 50% raw emotion. it's always easy to write about something if you feel keenly on the subject. ~O.A. Link to comment
ShySoul Posted December 28, 2005 Share Posted December 28, 2005 Raw emotion is what fuels as to be at our best. It takes our talents and jacks it up a notch. Outcast, you do have talent. Felt like the poem was describing my feelings. Definitely post more. Link to comment
Outcast-Angel Posted December 28, 2005 Author Share Posted December 28, 2005 Raw emotion is what fuels as to be at our best. It takes our talents and jacks it up a notch. Outcast, you do have talent. Felt like the poem was describing my feelings. Definitely post more. i'll see what i can come up with.. maybe i'll fix up some of my older work.. thank you though. ~O.A. Link to comment
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