brave Posted July 4, 2003 Share Posted July 4, 2003 :sad: It's been a bad day I'm getting used to it now another sad day I'd cry but I dunno how I'm drowning in thoughts of how things used to be my chest was shut tight complete w/ purity It's out in the open should've kept to myself I'll learn from mistakes take my heart off the shelf my soul has now fled it's my body alone and it's far too much hurt for my heart to come home I give it up now there's no way to win w/o you here my world still spins It's been a bad day I'll try to let it not show another sad day and I'm just letting go.... Link to comment
SwingFox Posted July 6, 2003 Share Posted July 6, 2003 Thank you for sharing this one ... Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted January 2, 2004 Share Posted January 2, 2004 god i have to say that was the best one ive read up to now, by you and other members. the whole use of words and how you used them in relevence to items. It's out in the open should've kept to myself I'll learn from mistakes take my heart off the shelf i particularally liked this verse and the way you phrased this. sorry to here of this, but it seems that you have strengthed. would you say that youve become hardened to loving with what you put, about taking your heart of the shelf? as if not being available or moving on? great poem. kel Link to comment
Cid Posted January 2, 2004 Share Posted January 2, 2004 Wow that is good no grate that has to be the best poem that I have ever read. Your good at this keep writing them. Link to comment
take_the_reins Posted February 5, 2004 Share Posted February 5, 2004 hey, i have to say thats a very nice poem ! the words just seem flow after eachother like all those words we're ment to be together ... even thought its not very uplifing .. is makes you think! keep it up! ~hopskotch~ Link to comment
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