Ravenshadow Posted June 28, 2003 Share Posted June 28, 2003 Your eyes are beautiful Seemingly indescribable So soft and pure So innocent they're allure Your skin so soft so smooth Your touch is that to soothe And your hair so long Your entity captures me and leaves my heart in a throng Watching you move is like watching a dance I thank the heavens for giving me the chance To be by your side and hold you close And be in your embrace Taste your sweet honey breath to my lips And feel my heart sink as it dips Never do I want to let go And I just want you to know I love you And I'll never let go of you Link to comment
ezila Posted June 28, 2003 Share Posted June 28, 2003 I have yet to be less than impressed by *ANY* of the pieces you've posted thus far. Go for it. If she's not thrilled, then she's not worth you wasting your talents upon. Link to comment
biasedidiot2 Posted June 29, 2003 Share Posted June 29, 2003 r u a pro or somthin jeez im 1 best poets at school and thats good. give it 2 her Link to comment
Ravenshadow Posted June 29, 2003 Author Share Posted June 29, 2003 dude I'm 14. the day i become a pro..I'll laugh But thank you Link to comment
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