Just wanna know wat u ppl think of it....

[Ravenshadow]

The wind calmly blows through her hair

Hair long, long and fair

Smooth as silk, soft as satin

A constant dream that I've been trapped in

Her eyes glow as the sun does shine

Bright twinkling stars, how so fine

Time stops far and near

When a single drop falls, a single tear

Embrace her, and feel her close

And smell the sweet scent, the scent of a lone rose

If this is a dream then I never wish to wake

For her, reality may take

This fantasy can't be real

For it's impossible for a human this way to feel

So I pray that it be real

For my heart, she did steal.

[pi_anochik]

Beautiful. That's the only word that describes it. It was absolutely Beautiful.

[Ravenshadow]

thank u...maybe ill post another sumtime..

[pi_anochik]

You're welcome and you should post more!!! You have a talent for it as far as I can see!

[sisterlynch]

Excellent Poem!! Keep up the good work!!

[cs20thcenturyfox]

Very good poem! Can't wait to read more...keep it up!!