scootermojo Posted May 26, 2005 Share Posted May 26, 2005 this is a poem i wrote the i just found out that is going to be published! hope you guys enjoy... FADE AWAY She dance's in front of me Hopping and skipping like a pebble accross water Singing and dancing in the rain of sunshine Hair galloping accross the wind She dance's in front of me Pulling on my hand and twisting me around Twirling and twirling 'till we become one Touching my soul with affection She dance's in front of me Promising an eternity of adulation Bestowing words of beautiful devotion Stars will die but our love will burn forever She dance's in front of me Drifting from what was never meant to be Drinking wine, laughing and fading away Hopping and skipping away from me forever Link to comment
igor512 Posted May 26, 2005 Share Posted May 26, 2005 I feel so teased after reading that. How she's just in front of you, but the twirl is the only thing you feel. Sweet. Quick hint, no apostraphe for how you used dances, but that's nitpicking. Nice poem! Link to comment
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