Jeffie Posted January 3, 2005 Share Posted January 3, 2005 Here is a few poems I've done. First one is just a quic cute one I jotted down. I can't remember if I had heard the first part of this somewhere sometime, or if I came up with it on my own let me know if it is from something else. if wishes were kisses i'd have only 3 one from me to you and one from you to me and one for the night thats cold and grey because i havent seen your face all day. The Snowflake I have held my mouth open always watching thousands of snowflakes dancing circles above my head forever I have wished to catch a single flake and let it melt upon my tongue I have seen many tumble towards me missing by only inches not until the present have I caught one and felt the way I am I barely saw this one coming just before its gentle landing it was distinct from the others and fell in a different way I closed my eyes just in time to feel the snowdrop's pleasing chill It warms me from the inside and paints a gentle grin I hope through the summer the fragile snow will sit upon my tongue never melting completely or be taken away by the summertime wind Twin Pools While the pools are filled To blur out the world Amongst a confused and soggy twilight there is battle being lost Lost to a sky of a Thousand thoughts When the heavy clouds shall be Whisked a way To reveal the light that has been smotherd by a cloud that sits alone and gray This question is a riddle That can only yet, be answered by one That sits in a quiet solitude with unknown lore Somewhere cloaked in a vast unseen Knowing of the rain that fills today While resting on those cloudless days of yore After the pools are drained Of their somber bleak thoughts That once filled there chambers On the light of the prior The day must be the today But it once sat as a tomorrow That was hoped to bring A clear and cloudless hour That awaited hour Has brought forth the present And perchance may still bring A bygone shower that may fill the pools With a saddened dew That shall not be dripped Just left to reflect the sky To those who stayed near When the weather held warmth And a pleasured daystar Yet those who perched close When the days sat wet, Clouded and drear, Shall view Deep Into the pools secrets That were hidden before The rain has ceased falling From the clouds that hold no more It has all fallen to rest in the pools That will reflects the thoughts That sit with many others in a clouded and confused sky I pray these pools to reflect the image of one one that has filled the pools but also helped empty their contents the reflected one has looked deeper into them than any other knowing of the secrets that rest on the bottom deep below the surface and if the pools holdings are cold and chill the reflected one knows how to bring warmth and solace to the pair I welcome comments to all, please let me know if you would like to me to post more as I have many others. Cheers! Jeff Link to comment
11flower Posted January 4, 2005 Share Posted January 4, 2005 Jeffie, I really think you should put the first one on a notecard. It's sweet and good for that,IMO. 11Flower Link to comment
Jeffie Posted January 4, 2005 Author Share Posted January 4, 2005 thank you 11 flower! Link to comment
11flower Posted January 5, 2005 Share Posted January 5, 2005 You're very welcome! Keep writing! IMHO, you really should try putting that though on a notecard. What if you could submit it to somewhere and have it printed? Or, if you do calligraphy, you could make up special cards yourself and sell them. Oh well...just thoughts. 11Flower Link to comment
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