A few poems I have written.

[Jeffie]

Here is a few poems I've done.

 

First one is just a quic cute one I jotted down. I can't remember if I had heard the first part of this somewhere sometime, or if I came up with it on my own let me know if it is from something else.

 

if wishes were kisses i'd have only 3

one from me to you and one from you to me

and one for the night thats cold and grey because

i havent seen your face all day.

 

 

The Snowflake

 

I have held my mouth open always

watching thousands of snowflakes

dancing circles above my head

forever I have wished to catch a single flake

and let it melt upon my tongue

 

I have seen many tumble towards me

missing by only inches

not until the present have I caught one

and felt the way I am

 

I barely saw this one coming

just before its gentle landing

it was distinct from the others

and fell in a different way

I closed my eyes just in time

to feel the snowdrop's pleasing chill

 

It warms me from the inside

and paints a gentle grin

I hope through the summer

the fragile snow will sit upon my tongue

never melting completely

or be taken away by the summertime wind

 

 

 

Twin Pools

 

While the pools are filled

To blur out the world

Amongst a confused and soggy twilight

there is battle being lost

Lost to a sky of a

Thousand thoughts

 

When the heavy clouds shall be

Whisked a way

To reveal the light that has been smotherd

by a cloud that sits

alone

and gray

This question is a riddle

That can only yet, be answered by one

That sits in a quiet solitude with unknown lore

Somewhere cloaked in a vast unseen

Knowing of the rain that fills today

While resting on those cloudless days of yore

 

After the pools are drained

Of their somber

bleak thoughts

That once filled there chambers

On the light of the prior

The day must be the today

But it once sat as a tomorrow

That was hoped to bring

A clear and cloudless hour

 

That awaited hour

Has brought forth the present

And perchance may still bring

A bygone shower

that may fill the pools

With a saddened dew

That shall not be dripped

Just left to reflect the sky

To those who stayed near

When the weather held warmth

And a pleasured daystar

 

Yet those who perched close

When the days sat wet,

Clouded and drear,

Shall view Deep Into the pools secrets

That were hidden before

 

The rain has ceased falling

From the clouds that hold no more

It has all fallen to rest in the pools

That will reflects the thoughts

That sit with many others

in a clouded and confused sky

 

I pray these pools to reflect

the image of one

one that has filled the pools

but also helped empty their contents

the reflected one has looked deeper

into them than any other

knowing of the secrets that rest

on the bottom

deep below the surface

 

and if the pools holdings

are cold and chill

the reflected one knows

how to bring warmth and solace to the pair

 

 

I welcome comments to all, please let me know if you would like to me to post more as I have many others.

 

Cheers!

Jeff

[11flower]

Jeffie,

 

I really think you should put the first one on a notecard. It's sweet and good for that,IMO.

 

11Flower

[Jeffie]

thank you 11 flower!

[11flower]

You're very welcome! Keep writing!

 

IMHO, you really should try putting that though on a notecard. What if you could submit it to somewhere and have it printed?

 

Or, if you do calligraphy, you could make up special cards yourself and sell them.

 

Oh well...just thoughts.

 

11Flower