It's been one year...

[heartbroken_f]

It's been one year and I still can't get over you

I try with all my might but there's nothing I can do

 

When I see other people I see your face

No matter what I do, your image I cannot erase.

 

I wonder whether you think about me, whether you regret what you've done

But then on the other hand I think about what you said and how I was shunned

 

My life revolved around you and I believed you would be true

But then you just decided to lie to me way out of the blue

 

I would have given up everything to spend forever with you

But now that I can't trust you anymore, letting go was the right thing to do

 

I hope you regret what youve done and somehow still think of me

Because knowing that in my heart will ultimately set me free...

 

Wishing things were different...

Heartbroken_f

[sisterlynch]

I think that sounds really nice. You just need to put in the music, and I think that you have a real winner.

[Serendipity1607307077]

Very soulful and truthful..

Just a little bit of refinement and it will be the perfect poem!

[under_the_pressure]

That poem is really great, I like the emotion in it. Great job, I hope to see more.

 

under*

[heartbroken_f]

Thanks for your comments everyone. I just felt like I had to write that poem because one year had passed and the feelings are still raw.

 

I hope that things will get better with time...

[darealshady86]

great poem, everything it talked about is what i think too.

[lostyearsofmerlin]

dude that is awesome. i felt exactly the same way after i broke up with my first gf. dont worry your not alone.

[ForAnother]

Excellent. Enjoyed it very much. Same way we all feel when that happens. Not a fun thing to deal with

 

ForAnother