poem with no name

[bluey]

going through some rough times so thought i get it out in a poem. don't know what to call it. see what you think?

 

i wait here looking at you

you look back and smile

i break inside

my eyes burn

but i save it for another day

 

my silents sobs not heard by you

heard by those who cant do anything

accept try there best

but they have there lives to lead

so i bottle it up

 

then i see you with someone else

you see me looking

so you look back with a face full of pity

holding the things i brought you

but i force a smile

 

when we are together

when we laugh and play

i touch your hand and im in bliss

but its just a game to you

so i force myself to move away

 

i will never forget the days we had

do you even remember?

how happy i was and so were you

thats why i dont understand

but i try and it never works

 

when i look at you

so beatiful so happy

all i imagine is the next guy with his arms around you

everything seems to fit together for you

you've no secrets to hide, no dark thought in your mind

so i lie to myself again

 

the things you offer i don't want

a friendship

but if i said no you'd cry

so i force a yes

and hide my pain

so you can smile

i wonder if you've noticed that?

how hard i try

but in the end

you've said what you've said

your words in my head

the pain in my mind

and your name in my heart

where i dont want it to be

[Coyote_the_trickster]

maybe forgotten smile?

[justtwicethen]

Bluey man.

 

This poem...is breathtaking...

 

but how can it come from a 15 year old? Admit it, you're 40 right?

[Coyote_the_trickster]

Bluey man.

 

This poem...is breathtaking...

 

but how can it come from a 15 year old? Admit it, you're 40 right?

 

You would be amazed what us young people are made of lol

 

I wrote stuff a while back, and what not. I stoped. I only write now when I am reflecting...But sadly only one person ever sees it besides me, and she said it was really good...I dunno

 

 

 

anyways Bluey Nice work, very impressive.

[under_the_pressure]

Excellent! I really enjoyed that poem. Are you 40? Just kiddin'

I can relate, I've been there. If you need to talk, I'm here. Great job...and I hope to read more.

 

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[i_hate_the_world47]

That was an amazing poem.Good job.od Job i hope to hear more from you.sorry your feeling down.If you ever need someone to talk to feel free to PM me.

 

to justtwicethen,just because he is 15 doesnt mean he cant write.Age is a number not a person.

 

~Meagan~

[2rublueeyes21]

this was a sad poem i hope you get over your heartbrake soon! there's other girls out there, just be patient..your young!!

[bluey]

thanks for all the posts and support guys put a smile on my face

[ang3l2004]

Very good poem

[ForAnother]

agreed excellent.

 

ForAnother

[The Enigmatical Mr X]

Poetry always seems it's best when riding the most violent of swells. Your pen is a blessing to paper.

[Gauchori]

I'll say that his pen and the paper were made for eachother...