Who am i?

[nikkinoodles]

Who am i, thats what i ask,

i used to know, but ive lost that clarity

now im surrounded

by all these clouds

and i cant see a clearing

 

no one else understands,

i try to explain, but i cant get it out

i have to joke it off

blame it all on my ditzy little world

thats what im living in

wandering the streets,

all alone, and everything is crazy,

 

i am searching, for the answers

to a thousand questions, and a million more

what happened to the girl that knew everything

where is she now

she used to feel, she used to care,

she used to have some sense

but she went away and hasnt come back

 

i cant see, i cant hear,

ive lost my voice,

surrounded by fear

struggling to break through

next an exit, all is black,

where did the light go

 

walking down this corridor,

a thousand doors, a million more

some are locked, some are boarded

some are bare, some are empty

with despair, some are themed

some are stylish, they're not mine

 

i regress my past,

nothing there connected

to whats screaming at mi,

it seems so obvious

but i just cant understand

i need some guidance

is it there

im reaching out my hand...

 

 

 

Why do i feel like putting "to be continued" at the end of this?

any thoughts, anyone?

[under_the_pressure]

thats a good poem. maybe you feel like putting that because there is more to say...and tell us what you reached out to...maybe good poem!

 

undeR*

[i_hate_the_world47]

I agree with under.Maybe you could make another poem and pick it up from whee this left off.Great poem by the way.

 

~Meagan~

[hardcore]

but i think that is a great poem were we leave thing's is the point i believe just like life it is not finished thats what i think but what do i know im just joe blow just a face in the crowed bottem line it was great 8)

[mamamaria]

whatss wrong with wandering alone?

[nikkinoodles]

thanx guys, i dont feel like i want to write another poem to go with it, it was just how i was feeling at the time of writing and it'd be hard for me to write a sequel when im not writing with feeling if u get what i mean. maybe its meant to feel like a "to be continued" but will never... hmmm... ok, thanx agen!

[hardcore]

i think it was great . just like life cut short feeling comes and go's just go with the flow 8)