honesttoblog Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 Stalemate Hypocrisy and disaster Slither underlining through the board, Gather spikes with their spawn And remain concealed to the pieces above. Yet those figures who live caught up in light, Who lay hidden under a blanket of lies; That safety of ignorance, Glide further away from common sight. These characters eyes lock once, Impacting each with a different stance, And the years withdrawn commence. One moves forward One moves back One moves right One moves left One moves bent One moves straight. Yet when finally they collide. Nothing occurs, But confusion begins to creep inside. One moves forward One moves back One moves right One moves left One moves bent One moves straight. Finally I push forward, But you pull back...... Till we hit that grey area, Stalemate. That ever consuming abyss, Which disbanded said fight, But made way for another era, Another learnt chapter in life. The futility of us. Link to comment
little_buttercup Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 I really, really like this. The word choice, the imagery, the last part... "the futility of us" hits home. Do you have more poetry on here? Link to comment
honesttoblog Posted March 10, 2011 Author Share Posted March 10, 2011 Thank you yes I do if you just look in the poetry section and it's ones written my me1993, hope you enjoy Link to comment
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