Paul-From-Oz Posted July 27, 2004 Share Posted July 27, 2004 Hi everyone! Over the past 18 months I have used my pen and paper to empty my thoughts to keep my heart alive and to document my dreams with the only girl I will wait for. I hope you all like my 1st contribution. ------------------------------------------------ I miss you with all of my heart so much time has past and I have never stopped loving you. When I sleep I dream of a world with you where our hearts are bound our kisses are real... I can again feel your touch and I quiver when I smell you. I have spent thousands of hours wishing for this moment to come true and as i have just one lifetime to live I only keep praying you join me again soon. My heart is yours for an eternity and I would give my soul to prove my sincerity. ----------------------------------------------- [-o Link to comment
lunatic Posted July 27, 2004 Share Posted July 27, 2004 Hey Paul, That is a wonderful poem. Keep up the writing it is really good. Hubman 8) Link to comment
ang3l2004 Posted July 27, 2004 Share Posted July 27, 2004 excellent poem keep writing!!! Link to comment
Paul-From-Oz Posted July 28, 2004 Author Share Posted July 28, 2004 Thankyou so much for your replies hubman & angel! I'll keep trying! Link to comment
jaiva Posted July 29, 2004 Share Posted July 29, 2004 I like the poem. Continue to write. Jaiva Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 30, 2004 Share Posted July 30, 2004 Nice poem. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
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