nothingontheinside Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 Please just tell me what you think... Honesty is greatly appriciated... thanks "Sin" Dig deep beneath my skin Show me blood, feel no sin Wounds show up Pain Corrupt Cracked silver blade of joy Play with me my precious toy Caress my skin ever so softly In my eyes it shines ever so brilliantly Split my skin Lips curl into an upwards grin Pleasure from each precious cut Tearing out my inner gut Tears fall slowly down my face I pray today is the last of my days Crimson Hate trickling down slowly down my arm Silver razor blade of charm Link to comment
brokenpogostick Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 wow, that's deep...are you thinkin of suicide or what? i'm concerned about you is there something you need to talk about? Link to comment
martyj Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 u obviously have a talent with words and an imagination to suit explore this talent and work hard and believe in your own ability hope that helps MartyJ 8) Link to comment
lunatic Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 I liked the poem even though it had major suicide implications in it. I hope your writing about something you feel and not something you plan on doing. Please talk to someone if your at that point in your life because it is not worth ending it all. You have WAY TOO much to live for. If you need people to talk to then you had better talk to your parents or a counselor at school about what is bothering you. PM me if you need to talk, Hubman Link to comment
matty722 Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 an Excellent poem WELL DONE 8) 8) 8) 8) hope there is nothing rong it is very moving Link to comment
L0stS0uL Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 Wow man you really do know how to write poems.... i've tried some but they never come out as good as your did. Keep writing them and dont do nothing stupid, you got a great talent dont let it come to waste! Link to comment
nothingontheinside Posted July 1, 2004 Author Share Posted July 1, 2004 thanks you all for caring... yeah well i am a cutter but im not gonna kill myself... yet atleast Link to comment
lunatic Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 Nothingontheinside, I hope your seeking help for your cutting problem. It is something that should be dealt with as soon as possible. Although, I don't understand why you hurt yourself I think you should seek some couseling. Hey maybe I am wrong but, your young and have your whole life ahead of you. It does get better and life is what you make of it. I lived with depression for over twenty years. I never was happy never smiled never laughed. I was just a shell of a human being and I finally had it. I went to the Dr and was put on meds. Within four months I am a totally different person and I can even see in myself the change. Seek help because no one will seek it for you. PM me if you need to talk. Good luck and keep writing!!! Hubman Link to comment
xthe core enemyx Posted July 2, 2004 Share Posted July 2, 2004 It's was very good, in my eyes. it had emotion and is very deep. Keep up the good writing... just don't consider suicide as an answer to your problems, there are other ways. Link to comment
nothingontheinside Posted July 3, 2004 Author Share Posted July 3, 2004 thanks to all of you Link to comment
behind_these_eyes Posted August 13, 2004 Share Posted August 13, 2004 i know this was posted over a month ago, but I just read it, and thought it was incredible. I hope you're okay though, and keep up the great writing. Link to comment
mtastic Posted August 13, 2004 Share Posted August 13, 2004 yeah, i just saw it as well, thanks to behind_these_eyes bringing it back to the top of the forum. Its very good, very emotional, and it well constructed too. I hope you're able to get your cutting under control, please seek help for that, be it with friends, counciling or just talking to us, nobobdy wants to see anything bad happen to you. Keep the poems coming, you are obviously quite talented. Best of luck and keep up the good work, mtastic Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 13, 2004 Share Posted August 13, 2004 That was a deep poem.I could relate very well.It also had a suicidal message.I hope everything is ok and if you ever need to talk feel free to PM me, ~Meagan~ Link to comment
dpressedone89 Posted August 13, 2004 Share Posted August 13, 2004 wow!*round of applause* that was amazing i dont know how i missed that when it was posted. anyway great poem very deep, if you need to talk IM me but your probably not planning anything my poems are similar to this and its just a tone to art the subject matter that is but if im wrong and you do need to talk you know im always here for you. luv u and ur writing, -stitches aka The Antihero Link to comment
writergurl Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 It was a very beautiful poem and I saw your meaning in it the first time I read it. You described how cutters feel perfectly. Most people who cut tend to keep their problems inside and hidden. Often they are the strength for everyone around them. It's hard to express their feelings and they feel incredibly guilty for their "Sins" as you say in your poem. It's an overwhelming feeling when you don't know what to do with those feelings you're having and the only way to make it go away is to cut. When you peirce the skin and you see the blood trickle, it's like you say "wounds show up". People who cut have trouble expressing their pain so they release it secretly by cutting. It's like purging all the bad things from your body. Kind of the same thing with people with eating disorders. While cutting is dangerous and I agree with other posters that you should seek help with that, I do understand exactly why you do it. And you have an amazing writing talent that I would like to see more of. thanks! Link to comment
Stinkweed Posted August 17, 2004 Share Posted August 17, 2004 That's a great poem. You've really got a talent with words. I hope you feel better now. Great job =D>. Link to comment
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