ay0_x Posted August 21, 2009 Share Posted August 21, 2009 I wrote this tonight. He broke into her life again He told her that he'd changed. He swore that this time around He wouldn't cause such pain. He said he wasn't angry He cried that he was sorry He begged for one more chance to write The ending of their story. Enamoured by his looks, she fell for his charm. She'd missed the way she felt when she was laying in his arms. But pretty faces always make They make the best of masks. And sweet nothing's are easily faked So she vowed to shield her heart. This girl was full of patience He gave excuses, she gave chances She'd fought for everything she had So she'd die for what she wanted. It was getting hard to tell Who meant ill from who wished well But guarded in her wounded heart She set herself to fail. He said he couldn't take it Her distance was too blatant He was really hurting His will quickly fading A pair of would -be lovers That could never trust another His insecurity caused by An unknown, absent father. A pair of would -be lovers That could never trust another Her shrewdness brought by A weak and smothering mother A pair of could -be lovers Really perfect for each other. Too bad they never learnt to trust. It would have been much better. It could have been forever... Link to comment
agburns84 Posted August 21, 2009 Share Posted August 21, 2009 That was really touching and beautiful. A poem well told with a story so many people could relate to. Fantastic effort, well done Link to comment
bexcelant Posted August 21, 2009 Share Posted August 21, 2009 That was beautiful and now I will post my own of what could have been. Dancing Girl Twirling, laughing, spinning Carefree dancer Betrayal and pain and the dancer was gone Searching searching always searching Who am I? Where is my father? Won't someone love me? Happiness smiles laughter Twirling, smiling, spinning Moments frozen in time Link to comment
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