bubbles Posted April 2, 2004 Share Posted April 2, 2004 Love is part of life It causes hearts to skip a beat Making the bitter things in life Turn into something sweet Love can mend a broken heart It can take away the pain The perfect form of healing Love is a necessary gain Love should always be savoured Like the finest red wine Beneath a starlit sky How beautifully love will shine Love can bring new life To a heart void of love It can send spirits soaring Upon the wings of a dove Love can make you a slave To passion and desire It envelops your inner being Of love you will never tire Love should always be nurtured It is worth much more than gold Affairs of the heart are priceless They can never be brought or sold Link to comment
mahlina Posted April 2, 2004 Share Posted April 2, 2004 Love should always be savoured Like the finest red wine Beneath a starlit sky How beautifully love will shine Amazing! Juust Amazing! Bravo! That's passion for ya! Nice Job in capturing the spiritual saga of love!!! Link to comment
SLBG Posted April 2, 2004 Share Posted April 2, 2004 Thank you bubbles, You have summed things up so well, your poem is deep and meaningful. I would love to send my ex girlfriend your poem. Im currently working on my own poem, I will post it when it is finished. Keep up the good work. slbg Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted April 3, 2004 Share Posted April 3, 2004 the rhythm and beat were good and i enjoyed reading the poem and what you wrote of the positive side was great yet for some reason i felt you missed out what love can do to others in a negative way. i can see you were defining the positive and what you defined summed things up well yet i guess for those who have been hurt, a new love or heart does not heal the last or at least it takes time. nice though. kel Link to comment
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