A short poem

[Kamikaze]

Just wrote this, what do you all think?

 

Why Do I go on?

I don't know…

Its not for me,

I have nothing left.

All my hope is gone.

I do it for the others,

For the ones I care most about.

BUT ITS NOT FOR ME…

I wish it would all end,

All the hurt and pain

My life means nothing any more,

Why do I go on……………

[thatguy04]

Kinda morbid, but good poem, good job =D>

[swift44]

nice poem its sounds great, i think i get what it is about, if i am right then i feel that i can relate to it keep up the good work and please share more of them

[dude123]

Good poem shows a lot of anger and sadness. Keep your head up and don't worry about the past. Live as the days go on. My uncle told me this today. I don't know what he fully means by it.

[NewBreedGirl]

very nice poem.....really liked it....made it one of my away messages haha ... i can really relate =)

[neva_black_n_white]

interesting poem, seems like a read in between the lines suicidal one, but i really liked it.

i know what you mean though, when you say your doing it for everyone but you, and thinking about others. and thats a pretty good characteristic so i give you a whole lot of credit for that!

 

great poem.

kel

[Kamikaze]

Thank you everyone, I'm glad you liked it. Its the story of my life and a question I ask myself every day. Yes Kel you are right, I originaly posted it in that forum but some how it got moved. Oh well I'm glad you all liked it.

[neva_black_n_white]

hey, sorry about that, i hope you didnt take it in the wrong sense, i generally meant in between the lines, and true depth within your writing. i did love your poem and im sorry that your post was removed.

 

thankyou kel

[Cid]

I know how you feel brother. I say that to my self every day too. Keep writeing it was good.

[Ash]

Hey, that's pretty moving. Are you writing in general about your past experiences (you talk about the ones you care most about) or did something specific happen to make you feel this way? Have you had a string of bad luck or broken relationships, or is there a major one in there somewhere that is holding you back?

 

If it's one person, why can't you move on? I'm in a bit of the same situation myself, and I too am trying to find a way forward. I think I can make it, but I realize I have to at some point walk away from it, and let her heal, and when she's better, I will be too.

 

We have to go on somehow. Get past it and start living for ourselves again.

 

What have you tried doing? I almost went on antidepressants, but was scared to start that even. I'm healing slowly, but it will take a long time. I'm not a young man, so my future may not be bright. Perhaps you are, and can still share a near full life with somebody else.