Kamikaze Posted December 26, 2003 Share Posted December 26, 2003 Just wrote this, what do you all think? Why Do I go on? I don't know… Its not for me, I have nothing left. All my hope is gone. I do it for the others, For the ones I care most about. BUT ITS NOT FOR ME… I wish it would all end, All the hurt and pain My life means nothing any more, Why do I go on…………… Link to comment
thatguy04 Posted December 27, 2003 Share Posted December 27, 2003 Kinda morbid, but good poem, good job =D> Link to comment
swift44 Posted December 27, 2003 Share Posted December 27, 2003 nice poem its sounds great, i think i get what it is about, if i am right then i feel that i can relate to it keep up the good work and please share more of them Link to comment
dude123 Posted December 27, 2003 Share Posted December 27, 2003 Good poem shows a lot of anger and sadness. Keep your head up and don't worry about the past. Live as the days go on. My uncle told me this today. I don't know what he fully means by it. Link to comment
NewBreedGirl Posted December 27, 2003 Share Posted December 27, 2003 very nice poem.....really liked it....made it one of my away messages haha ... i can really relate =) Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted December 27, 2003 Share Posted December 27, 2003 interesting poem, seems like a read in between the lines suicidal one, but i really liked it. i know what you mean though, when you say your doing it for everyone but you, and thinking about others. and thats a pretty good characteristic so i give you a whole lot of credit for that! great poem. kel Link to comment
Kamikaze Posted December 27, 2003 Author Share Posted December 27, 2003 Thank you everyone, I'm glad you liked it. Its the story of my life and a question I ask myself every day. Yes Kel you are right, I originaly posted it in that forum but some how it got moved. Oh well I'm glad you all liked it. Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted December 28, 2003 Share Posted December 28, 2003 hey, sorry about that, i hope you didnt take it in the wrong sense, i generally meant in between the lines, and true depth within your writing. i did love your poem and im sorry that your post was removed. thankyou kel Link to comment
Cid Posted December 28, 2003 Share Posted December 28, 2003 I know how you feel brother. I say that to my self every day too. Keep writeing it was good. Link to comment
Ash Posted December 30, 2003 Share Posted December 30, 2003 Hey, that's pretty moving. Are you writing in general about your past experiences (you talk about the ones you care most about) or did something specific happen to make you feel this way? Have you had a string of bad luck or broken relationships, or is there a major one in there somewhere that is holding you back? If it's one person, why can't you move on? I'm in a bit of the same situation myself, and I too am trying to find a way forward. I think I can make it, but I realize I have to at some point walk away from it, and let her heal, and when she's better, I will be too. We have to go on somehow. Get past it and start living for ourselves again. What have you tried doing? I almost went on antidepressants, but was scared to start that even. I'm healing slowly, but it will take a long time. I'm not a young man, so my future may not be bright. Perhaps you are, and can still share a near full life with somebody else. Link to comment
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