nickbroken Posted June 5, 2008 Share Posted June 5, 2008 Can you feel it scraping? Can you feeling it breaking down barriers neatly held in tact, clutched sarcophagus tightly ingrown inside this skin. Shedding skin are you still a mess, drooling up and down these walls between us will never break. Can it transcend into beauty this cocoon closely knit. If held too long it will break me. Peace peace I know that I'm only dreaming. Scent of your flesh sweet sound of you breathing. Can rest safely as I star at the ceiling. Link to comment
Angel_baby Posted June 5, 2008 Share Posted June 5, 2008 For freestyle that is really good Nick! Link to comment
nickbroken Posted June 5, 2008 Author Share Posted June 5, 2008 For freestyle that is really good Nick! Eh thanks, can't say I remember what I wrote I just write sometimes and don't really pay attention to it haha. Thanks for the positive remark though. Link to comment
doyathink Posted June 5, 2008 Share Posted June 5, 2008 Set that to some Metallica music, and you're all set. haha Link to comment
doyathink Posted June 5, 2008 Share Posted June 5, 2008 LMAO! You go gurl! And throw that bra while you're at it! Link to comment
Litgirl01 Posted June 5, 2008 Share Posted June 5, 2008 LMAO! You go gurl! And throw that bra while you're at it! Only if you do it with me!! LOL Nick...it's a nice song! ;-) Link to comment
nickbroken Posted June 5, 2008 Author Share Posted June 5, 2008 Only if you do it with me!! LOL Nick...it's a nice song! ;-) Eh it's not a song it's just some crap I wrote lastnight. Link to comment
Litgirl01 Posted June 6, 2008 Share Posted June 6, 2008 Eh it's not a song it's just some crap I wrote lastnight. I like the Sarcophagus part! Link to comment
Brittanyxvx Posted June 15, 2008 Share Posted June 15, 2008 It's very deep. Put together well, and the flow is decent. Kudos, Love. Link to comment
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