karma85 Posted May 30, 2008 Share Posted May 30, 2008 MY BODY BURNS FOR YOUR DESIRE. DAMN...SO HOT IT COULD SET YOUR SOUL ON FIRE. MY BODY MAY EAK BUT IT'LL NEVER GET TIRED. BUT HEY I'M GIVEN YOU SOMETHING YOU COULD ADMIRE. MY BODY SO HOT DONT YOU FEEL MY DESIRE LIKE JANET JACKSON SAID AND THE BI*** STILL AINT RETIRED. I WANT YOU SO BAD..BOY I COULD SET THIS ROOM ON FIRE. WE COULD DO THIS ALL NIGHT AND NOT GET TIRED. BUT HEY BABY I'M GIVEN YOU ALL THE POWER. NOW MY BODY'S MAKING YOU WONDER. I CAN HEAR YOUR HART POUNDING LIKE THUNDER. I'M LIKE WATER AND A SNICKERS BAR.. I COULD QUENCH YOUR THURST AND FEED YOUR HUNGER. HUNGERY BABY WHY WAIT. US TOGETHER WE COULD MAKE THE EARTH QUAKE. SO....I GOT THE GOODIES....ALL THAT YOU NEED USE YOUR IMAGINATION....AND COME FIND ME Link to comment
karma85 Posted May 30, 2008 Author Share Posted May 30, 2008 hey thank you i'm glad u liked it Link to comment
karma85 Posted June 1, 2008 Author Share Posted June 1, 2008 THANKS FOR THAT COMMENTS Siraf Link to comment
JCR84 Posted June 5, 2008 Share Posted June 5, 2008 the emphasis and imagery of this poem really stands out Link to comment
Dani0613 Posted September 13, 2008 Share Posted September 13, 2008 This is a great poem; powerful and intriguing... Link to comment
Jeremiah Johnson Posted September 14, 2008 Share Posted September 14, 2008 Great poem & love the two Janet Jackson lines Link to comment
karma85 Posted September 15, 2008 Author Share Posted September 15, 2008 Thank you guys for showin love Link to comment
Beoslasher Posted September 15, 2008 Share Posted September 15, 2008 Very sensual =P Loved the water, and snickers ref. and yes the imagery is amazing =D Great work. Link to comment
karma85 Posted December 1, 2008 Author Share Posted December 1, 2008 hey thank you sweeite....i'm happy u liked it...and the imagery Link to comment
Beoslasher Posted December 4, 2008 Share Posted December 4, 2008 Anytime!, I read it again, hm, you got a great skill, put more work on here! Link to comment
karma85 Posted December 4, 2008 Author Share Posted December 4, 2008 Anytime!, I read it again, hm, you got a great skill, put more work on here! ok thank you i might just do....took me awhile to work on this and try to get it flow more quickly Link to comment
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