StyleLimitz Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 Sometimes I feel like no one understands me… Sometimes I feel like I am all alone… No one could give a damn bout what I’m feeling… No one could care if I didn’t have a home… No one, will ever see this world the way I do, No one will even try. Sometimes, I wish people could understand me, but, I know they can’t. I wish could more people could just understand me, I’m not crazy I just view things differently. Not everyone is the same, we’re all different. You shouldn’t blend in, you should stand out. No one, will ever see this world the way I do, No one will even try. Sometimes, I wish people could understand me, but, I know they can’t. I don’t need anyone I can be lonely… I’ve done everything that I was told. I’m tired of being pushed around with no love… Even my friends think I’m under control… No one, will ever see this world the way I do, No one will even try. Sometimes, I wish people could understand me, but, I know they can’t. Link to comment
rs.dallaire Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 Do you play music? Is this meant to be a song or a poem? In any case, PRS make this wonderful guitar called the PRS One. It would go well with your tune. Link to comment
StyleLimitz Posted February 17, 2008 Author Share Posted February 17, 2008 Do you play music? Is this meant to be a song or a poem? In any case, PRS make this wonderful guitar called the PRS One. It would go well with your tune. This is meant to be a song. I am in a band and I make lots of poems/lyrics. I have a whole page of them made. If you go to my website in my public profile it's my poem/lyrics page. Link to comment
rs.dallaire Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 What instrument do you play? Or are you the singer? Link to comment
StyleLimitz Posted February 17, 2008 Author Share Posted February 17, 2008 What instrument do you play? Or are you the singer? Keyboards/vocals Link to comment
rs.dallaire Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 I like your song and how you've shaped it. Perhaps add a few images in your text so the message isn't so direct. Link to comment
StyleLimitz Posted February 17, 2008 Author Share Posted February 17, 2008 I like your song and how you've shaped it. Perhaps add a few images in your text so the message isn't so direct. It's based on another song I heard. But the lyrics are different. If you've ever heard "Say This Sooner" by The Almost. that's what i based the song off of Link to comment
rs.dallaire Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 I'm an old fart and I'm not familiar with that band. It's good that you have such influences but you'd be even more successful if you view these influences for what they are and inject more of your own self in the process. Good luck with the music! Link to comment
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