Pocket Rocket Posted September 28, 2007 Share Posted September 28, 2007 Billowed canvases of light, Cold electric and untamed. Arrows, Deafen in the dark. You count the minutes - they have names, Those anacondas of the mind. To attention, on the table, Bald and raw to reddened eyes, Gunshot white and bitter to the taste. In all, you are but shadowed walls - You squeeze, you squeeze; you suffocate. Gestures, moments and A face; it screams, it screams And ends the night. Link to comment
Clementine orange Posted September 28, 2007 Share Posted September 28, 2007 Excellent poem - I have insomnia too - it's brutal. the minutes have names - exactly right... Link to comment
Portage Posted September 28, 2007 Share Posted September 28, 2007 *SIGH* i can also relate Great job Link to comment
Pocket Rocket Posted September 28, 2007 Author Share Posted September 28, 2007 Thanks I'm always reluctant to post my poetry but this in one of my favourites so I thought I'd share. I'm glad there's others who can relate, but sad at the same time that so many of us out there suffer sleepless nights thanks again for the replies. Link to comment
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