my crush

[bubbles]

Every night before I sleep

There is one prayer I say

I ask God to make him like me

And this is what I pray

 

Dear God up above

I know that you're there

And every time I pray to you

I know that you care

 

Why must my best friend like him?

Why can't she understand?

I dream about him every night

She gets every guy on demand

 

She pulls him in

Then spits him out

This isn't what love

Is all about

 

She gets me mad

When she smiles at him

And then I realize

If hit the brim

 

It not a fun

Place to be

And I only wish

He would see

 

That I've liked him for so long

And I only wish he knew

A little more about me

What more can I do

 

For him or for me

For me or for him

It seems as if

The lights are dim

 

They get darker every day

When he notices her

And every time I see it

My world is a blur

 

Some say I'm jealous

Some say I'm obsessed

Others say I'm messed up

Yet some say I'm blessed

 

But it doesn't really matter

Because I don't listen any ways

And when Tuesday is over

I'm counting down the days

 

Until next week

For me to look in to his eyes

My pulse starts to race

And that's no surprise

 

For when I see him

My gray skies turn blue

It makes me want to see him

Even though my troubles are through

 

My heart is happy

When he starts to laugh

Thought it's usually to her

So my feelings are half

 

When ever I'm sad

I just say his name

And when I think about love

I know its no game

 

I know what I feel

I know who I am

And as I'm writing

My thoughts begin to cram

 

There is so much

I want to say

That it takes me over

A couple days

 

To finish a poem

About what I feel

And after I'm done

I know this is real

 

Theirs never been a person

Who has helped me this much

It just as if he

Have the lucky touch

 

When ever I see him

Talk to him on the phone

There is a feeling inside

That says I'm not alone

 

Sometime when I write

The feelings are too strong

And you can tell this

Because my poems are so long

 

This way I feel in side

Needs a special key

Which I thought had sunken

Deep in the sea

 

Yet now it's around his neck

Tied with a string

And when he stole my heart

The key he did bring

 

It kind of funny

I've never felt this way before

And even thought other guys like me

I am going to shut the door

 

Too keep them out

So I can see him

I feel as if I

Am holding to every limb

 

Can't he understand?

He was the one

Who inspired me to write

This is how I begun

 

He gave me a reason

That actually made scene

And now I fell like my heart

Is guarded my a fence

 

No one can hurt it

Not even mean friends

For all I do it think about him

 

And my sadness mends

 

As if by magic

But by love

A sudden sign

From up above

 

To love him like my brother

To cherish him like my friend

To take him in forever

So that my love won't bend

 

To care for him like my own child

To hope for his success

To tend to his every need

This is very hard to express

 

But becasue this is abotu him

Someone thats changed my life

For he is the one

Who made me want to strive

 

For my education

For his love

For a prayer with god

Who lives up above

 

Not literly

But yet honestly too

If their wasn't him

I don't know what I'd do

[Iwanthim]

Omg thanks soo good and inspiration. I actually wish i could write poems very good

[just_smile]

hey

=D> wow thats a great poem, it was very heartfelt and deep, it became deeper as the poem progressed i believe.

i really liked it, so keep writing

anyway thanks for sharing this with us

 

~LJ =;

[neva_black_n_white]

man that was long yet impressive, usually i get bored but i so wanted to listen to the end of yours. anyway great work, and like just_smile did, you deserve the applauds.

loved it ... lol

kel

[sphinx999]

Wow thats an amazing poem, you really managed to get all the emotions in there, you should think about doing it professionally. I'm honestly not being sarcastic I really enjoyed it.

Sphinx999 xxx