brando Posted June 26, 2007 Share Posted June 26, 2007 I am staring at a tomb-stone sky Clouds crying like mourners birds inscribing an epitaph a solemn sun leading the procession. Link to comment
ElektraHere Posted June 26, 2007 Share Posted June 26, 2007 The images you evoke with your poem are incredible. Keep up that writing. Link to comment
Portage Posted June 26, 2007 Share Posted June 26, 2007 sad and bittersweet. Like the ending to a great novel that leaves goose bumps Great job B!! Link to comment
brando Posted July 3, 2007 Author Share Posted July 3, 2007 Thank you all for your kind words. Link to comment
ElektraHere Posted July 3, 2007 Share Posted July 3, 2007 I think Raymond would have liked that one. ;-) Link to comment
brando Posted July 9, 2007 Author Share Posted July 9, 2007 There is an element of minimilism, which i think Ray would have appreciated. Thanks E. Link to comment
ElektraHere Posted July 9, 2007 Share Posted July 9, 2007 Perhaps Tess feels that way sitting on that bench writing in the journal? That's exactly where I pictured that poem. Its great to see your work Link to comment
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