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A coyote taking you away for a lesson

Maroon, sending soft waves of secrecy to you

21, going out to hve my first drink

Wyoming, a country place for farms

Confident to give feeling to those who are scared

Onion-rings, the food in which gives you happiness; pleasure

Halloween giving way for the paranormal to enter our world

Playing the piano for millions of fans

A rose to prick your finger of which you touch

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Good work again, Teen Angel ... great poem, although "21, going out to have my first drink" sounds a little weird to me. Hard to believe, even though your nick does say Angel. It could be possible, though

 

Hopefully you'll find some time to answer the question: what's the bottom line and how did you feel when you wrote this poem? Happy? Sad? Confused? I am putting some money on 'confused'

 

Keep posting

 

~ SwingFox ~

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