I liked it.. there are just a couple of things I noticed. In one place, the doctor's name is spelled differently and I think after her mother says "let's go," there are too many instances of "she" and not enough of "Kimberly." Not the whole rest of the way, just until her mother says "...and molested you Kim." Anyway, is this the very beginning? It does make me want to read on and find out more about what happens to Kim.