pimpcess Posted September 12, 2003 Share Posted September 12, 2003 You betrayed me, my love respect, and devotion, My soul's empty, but inside I still feel such emotion, I can't even explain to you, how much your problems mattered, But now I'm here with a bruised soul, and a heart so shattered, So pale in comparison, was every other, compared to you, When life got tough, I'd do anything I could to help you through, Overcoming every obstacle, you'd tell me, 'I did it for us', Everyday you'd reassure me, 'Im so committed to us', With every minute that passed through the day, I gave you a thought, Every little thing in life you did, You had my support, Every little thing you did, good or bad, I'd justify, The world was a better place when I looked in your eyes, You were my reason for living, you were my inspiration, But you betrayed me, and to this day I have no explanation, I promised myself I'd never let you see what you did to me, I hold my head high, and keep my final shred of dignity, But now and then I get that realisation that I'm alone, But I can do this, I'll go out there, and do it all on my own. What do you all think?? Link to comment
sabena Posted September 12, 2003 Share Posted September 12, 2003 did it get it all off your chest? I hope so, because you are obviously a very intelligent person and you are not alone... Move on girl and get excited because there is a huge world out there waiting for you to arrive Link to comment
babygurl Posted September 12, 2003 Share Posted September 12, 2003 Great poem, heartfelt, how long have you been writing? Keep it up Link to comment
pimpcess Posted September 12, 2003 Author Share Posted September 12, 2003 Yes I'm sooo over that!! It was a while back now, and I love getting it off my chest, I find poetry is the best way for me to do that. I haven't been writing long, I probably started this year. Thankyou for the kind words Link to comment
J_Rocc Posted September 12, 2003 Share Posted September 12, 2003 sup pimpcess glad to hear you're over him, as i am over her too. nice poem. just like all the other poems you've written so far. J_Rocc Link to comment
Me1607306747 Posted September 12, 2003 Share Posted September 12, 2003 Hi pimpcess! I have read quite a few of your poems and you have a gift, please make sure you use it. Love me Link to comment
pimpcess Posted September 12, 2003 Author Share Posted September 12, 2003 Thanx everyone, glad you all liked it, and yes, I'm trying my hardest to use it!!! ~Pimpcess~ Link to comment
charmed Posted September 12, 2003 Share Posted September 12, 2003 Hey Pimpy ! This one is very stong and positive - I like it ! You finish off on a good strong note too Keep it up ! ~ Link to comment
pimpcess Posted September 12, 2003 Author Share Posted September 12, 2003 Thanx Charmed, and congrats on the candidate moderator position!! Thanx everyone. ~Pimpcess~ Link to comment
SweetypieEnlightenedOne Posted September 12, 2003 Share Posted September 12, 2003 WOW, Like a little hidden talent don't ya think? Yeah, that was great...if you are a singer I would suggest making a song out of that...it would be a top seller. Wow! I am going write a poem too, its called I'm not as cool as you!! Roses are red Violets are too I'm not cool As cool as you Ta DA!!! j/k No but really that was very well put together! Link to comment
pimpcess Posted September 12, 2003 Author Share Posted September 12, 2003 Aww thankyou!! I'm glad u liked it, I've wrote a few on here, if u check out the poetry u should see, thankyou, I'm glad u liked it, I'm sure we've all flt like that at some point or another. Thanx Sweety pie Link to comment
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