Forever Friends...

[darkling]

Ok, here's one I found that I wrote awhile ago... I'm sorry that everything I write takes on a slightly darker tone, it's just who I am I guess I write what I feel.

 

Forever friends,

a heart of stone,

love not spoken,

left alone.

 

Times we shared,

present to past,

love not spoken,

pain to last.

 

You understood,

my heart laid bare,

spoken aloud,

a silent stare.

 

Pain of mine,

my bleeding heart,

I spoke the truth,

love won't part.

 

I wear this pain,

so you are free,

dark inside,

they eat at me.

 

Hate for life,

my love defends,

you're never alone,

forever friends.

[HurleyBabe6917]

wow. that's awesome.

i love it very much.

good job.

 

[dil]

not bad, you may want to fix this small grammatical error in this stanza:

 

Hate for life,

my love defends,

your never alone,

forever friends.

 

it's you're not your

[darkling]

LOL dil, thnx

[InsomianicMind]

That is wonderful, Great Job.

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

That was such a great poem, i really enjoyed it