brando Posted September 1, 2006 Share Posted September 1, 2006 The rain stopping now Cold granite sun hanging high, Days passing; blue-less. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted September 1, 2006 Share Posted September 1, 2006 It sure does makes sense, thumbs up!!!!!1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted September 1, 2006 Share Posted September 1, 2006 short and peaceful, like Ailec said, makes sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted September 1, 2006 Share Posted September 1, 2006 the poet triumphs most inspired images i smell the wet earth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brando Posted September 2, 2006 Author Share Posted September 2, 2006 I appreciate the input..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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