Finish this poem

[Mayfairuk]

All of a sudden...a common phase, but what does it mean in the modern haze.

Please tell me if you have ever seen,

a half of a sudden or even ten.

what does it look like this sudden of yours?

does he have windows and tinted doors?

[BBHFutureAllAmerican]

is it wrong?

too far gone?

it's been way to long?

why spin in circles

we are one tonight

just don't drop the hand of even slight

this is my chance to take flight

 

does that work?

[AwdreeHpburn]

how will the light get through to shine?

if this is yours and that is mine?

I see us ending in a place not here

But one where there's little left but fear

[rose2summer]

I must walk to see the sun,

Why are you here my dear hun.

Where I must go,

I only know.

 

Ok, Rose is a little off today!

[brando]

Why are you here my dear hun

 

 

huh ?????

[rose2summer]

Why are you here my dear hun?

 

Why don't you get it brando?

[Mayfairuk]

Thats a fantastic addition I like it lots.

[Mayfairuk]

I like your words but its a bit disjointed when trying to add on to what I wrote. Your words are deep and meaningful, you will amke a fantastic husband one day...my poem started with humour and double meanings...theres a lot of misery out there to last us all a life time...I intended to make people laugh, and think how words can be twisted...but in this instance not twisted for gain but to laugh at ourselves...Is this just a english thing I wonder?

[Mayfairuk]

Is Hun a punn? a slip of the tongue? A Hun is a Krout who ended with nowt. A Krout is a cabbage full of goodness, green and lushious but needs to be boiled...without my krout my joints wouldnt be oiled.

 

Im here to find laugther and joy and intellegence, without such the world is menevolent.