pablovblack Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 I woke up again this morning to the same bad dream Or should I say my new life Removed of its greatest piece The piece that held an insecure fool together for so long What do you think of in the morning Do I cross your fluffy mind Or have a melted in this summer heat we are having like a snowman stood at your door rolled in the wrong season When you look up at the stars and analyze the sky Do you wonder if it was ever meant to be When you eat microwave dinners do you see my sat with my tray I can see you as clear as the day There really is one thing that I want you to know That I would give my earth to have your mascara smudges back on my pillow I miss you monkey. Link to comment
arwen Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 Wellwritten, pablov. I hope writing these poems helps you heal from the break up. I recognise a lot of your feelings from my break up (a long time ago, I promise you WILL feel better!). Ilse Link to comment
4ppl Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 That's rilly good poem, keep up the good work. Hold your head up high...have faith... Everything will be all right tomorrow! You're talented!!!! ________ link removed Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 smiles. i was wondering why the title was mascara,and then it all clicked. good touch. i like that. smiles** its realistic.. not used to seeing that in poems on here, its refreshing. Link to comment
pablovblack Posted July 20, 2006 Author Share Posted July 20, 2006 Thanks guys thats very kind! Link to comment
yeawutever Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 Very creative poem indeed!!!!!! Link to comment
lilac_indi Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 that is a sweet wee poem - hope you felt good after you wrote it Link to comment
Hannahleh Posted July 22, 2006 Share Posted July 22, 2006 Aw, that was lovely. So sad. Link to comment
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