jarhead Posted August 3, 2003 Share Posted August 3, 2003 ok be4 i show this poem i wanna say, this is my first poem i've written becuz i wanted 2. so tell me what u think about it.: WHAT IF[b] I don’t know why i feel like this wishin’ i woulda gotten that kiss i dont why i sit here and wonder why WHAT IF what if i had only talked to her what if i had just left him alone what if i had told them how i felt would i be sitting here wondering... what if i lay here and wonder why i hadn’t taken that chance thinkin what woulda happened if i had would i be rich or have a girl with nice pants? because i lay here wondering WHAT IF what if i had only talked to her what if i had just left him alone what if i had told them how i felt would i be sitting here wondering... what if why cant i have that life i wanted way back when? what would happened if i hadnt left what if we always look back and remember the good and bad, but do we always look at what we coulda had what if? [/b] Link to comment
Bud Posted August 3, 2003 Share Posted August 3, 2003 The poem is great and has thought to it but later on down the road do u think u might be feeling this way? I'm a christian and I know that god has his ways, don't worry about your mistakes, it only makes you smarter and as you go on in life you will learn how the ropes work. Dr.Maylo Link to comment
jarhead Posted August 3, 2003 Author Share Posted August 3, 2003 im a christian to and believe God has His ways, but sometimes i wonder why and well what i had done something differently Link to comment
Happy_Go_Lucky_Heb Posted August 3, 2003 Share Posted August 3, 2003 Hey.. i think it's a pretty good poem. But i'm not a fan of "what if" i don't believe in that coz the past is the past and there's really no way 2 change it now without changing something else in the present. There's always good and bad things resulting from a decision. The what if's should've been thought up b4 making the decision and once its made, don't turn back. That's what i believe. Happy Heb Link to comment
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