Moon Goddess Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 Listen to me, but only when I ask That's all I really want To be heard and not have to wear a mask That beautiful mask I choose to flaunt Listen to me I am silently screaming Screams from my heart and soul pleading Pleading for someone to save me and stop the tease If I choose to scream out Will you listen or only judge Judge me on what I pretend to be Or just search for the fault in me I guess I'm really scared of me Since I hide myself so bad But if look in my eyes and listen, you just might see All the things I pretend to be I pleaded no one answered Now I close myself to the world Close out to everyone who never heard I'm lost now distant and cold Link to comment
Star6 Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 Aww thats beautiful. Well done Moon Goddess. I can relate to this aswell. It's very good. xx Link to comment
ShySoul Posted January 5, 2006 Share Posted January 5, 2006 Beautiful. We all wear masks at times, sad that we often feel afraid to reveal our true selfs. Sad that we try to hide ourselves, afraid of what we feel inside. But we shouldn't be afraid, we should learn to love ourselves more. And there are others who understand us and whom we can trust. Link to comment
Moon Goddess Posted January 5, 2006 Author Share Posted January 5, 2006 True but still that doesn't stop it from happening, I wrote this poem before Christmas break, I guess that's how I feel in school most of the time. Link to comment
ShySoul Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 I felt that way in school most of the time as well. Didn't really have anyone I connected with and could really trust until 10th grade when I met my best friend, still best friend to this day. Just one person like that makes a world of difference. Hope you find that person soon. Link to comment
Moon Goddess Posted January 6, 2006 Author Share Posted January 6, 2006 Yea I guess you can say I already have my best friend since 1st grade we are inseperable she is the only one from school that I trust completely Link to comment
Hidden Royalty Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 I can partially recognize my own feelings in this poem. I'm always looking for myself when i read poetry, I'm looking for a meaning to everything that happens and that is why I tend to appareciate more the pieces in which I recognize myself. So yeah, I love this one =) Link to comment
Moon Goddess Posted January 11, 2006 Author Share Posted January 11, 2006 Thanks and I'm sorry that you can relate it's not good to feel like this but I think most people do sometimes and can't help it but Thanks Link to comment
Hidden Royalty Posted January 17, 2006 Share Posted January 17, 2006 Sometimes, yes, and you're welcome. Link to comment
Blured Posted January 18, 2006 Share Posted January 18, 2006 It's a good poem. reveals a real feeling of being frustrated by how the world judges outer appearances, and how we wear masks to suit this? Nice poem. A really nice poem. Link to comment
Moon Goddess Posted January 31, 2006 Author Share Posted January 31, 2006 Thanks, yeah that is pretty much what I wanted to express wuith this poem i may be posting again soon I haven't been writing as often but we'll see Link to comment
Shadows Light Posted January 31, 2006 Share Posted January 31, 2006 Very nice... grin.. and aye people judge me depending which cloak I choose to wear that day....but no one see's whats beheath its folds. Link to comment
Moon Goddess Posted January 31, 2006 Author Share Posted January 31, 2006 Thanks Shadow's light it's true people judge based on what they see but what they see is not the truth, the truth lies deep within the eyes adn for that you really have to look Link to comment
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