SilverPoet Posted June 3, 2003 Share Posted June 3, 2003 I've seen this sh*t happen before, it happens often, everytime i turn my head, damn it's goin' on more n' more. On a hundred downers, seems it makes the pain go away; When i feel depressed, I write, it's an obsession, my heart throbing, emotionally, not a possession; How could you do this to me... what was it all for? How come you hurt me and not sooth me when I was sore? you ask me to come back to you, pleading at my door. How can i say this?... I'm not mad, but try to understand, I only see and feel for you as a friend. So if i could end this conversation fast, this will be the last moment I'll ever have with your a$$. Now you feel the disarray... What irony that you would start feelin' this way... I am sorry these words are harsh... but it's what i needed to say... Been together..wuz together...not now,anymore,or even whenever by the way tell me if ya liked it? Peace B Copyrighted by Darrian Blades (Immunity) Link to comment
SwingFox Posted June 6, 2003 Share Posted June 6, 2003 Hi Darrian, This is another great piece of art. Well done again on this poem. You're very good. I hope that you will find a brighter future soon. Keep up your hopes and smile! There's a beautiful world out there Good luck!! ~ SwingFox ~ Link to comment
pimpcess Posted September 3, 2003 Share Posted September 3, 2003 I thought it was great and how poetry should be- Heartfelt. Well done Link to comment
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