Borashi Posted December 26, 2004 Share Posted December 26, 2004 When I open my eyes, the darkness arrives Not a chance to defend, it penetrates my mind Like a black dog alone in the forest, it attacks my thoughts I try to justify the voices, I'd do anything to please Just leave me alone, I won't tell no more lies But it's all a disguise, hidden amongst the pain A voice calls out "I'll never be the same!" Link to comment
martyj Posted December 26, 2004 Share Posted December 26, 2004 thats good poetry you should maybe get that down with some haunting piano music. explore and you shall find, nurture your talent for writing. respect MJx Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted December 26, 2004 Share Posted December 26, 2004 That was an amazing poem.You have talent. ~meagan~ Link to comment
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